The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart and table illustrate the percentages of different export
products
in a country in 2015 and 2016 and it shows the amount
of changes Change the quantifier
number
about
export value in percentage during that duration, Change preposition
in
However
, each category were
included primary Change the verb form
was
products
or goods which was
measured in Correct subject-verb agreement
were
billion
dollars.
Overall
as it can be seen, since 2015 the transport earnings have increased compared with 2016 except for gems and jewellery which had experienced Correct article usage
a sharply
sharply
down to 5.81%. Change the word
sharp
Besides
, two types of Add an article
the category
a category
category
(agricultural Fix the agreement mistake
categories
products
and textiles) in 2015 in 31 and 26 billion
, but in next
year have Correct article usage
the next
steady
up Correct article usage
a steady
to
0.81% and 15.24%, respectively.
Change preposition
of
However
, petroleum products
experienced a rise considering
the previous year (2015) Change preposition
in
about
3% (61 to 63 Change preposition
by about
billion
dollars) and on the other hand
, engineered products
has
massively changed to 8.5% (58 to 63 Change the verb form
have
billion
dollars).
Completely, in during one period could be observed about processes of export products
and growing up to features than the past year.Submitted by bahare_eilbeygi_asli on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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