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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart gives a breakdown of two genders teachers in six different levels of
education
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the education
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 system in the UK in 2010. In
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general
, female teachers were famous
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 teaching from toddlers to secondary
school
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. Meanwhile, male teachers were the highest percentage in teaching
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the
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university and private training.
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 the one hand, the highest figure for women was seen in Nursery/
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school
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 nearly 98%. Followed by
primary
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the primary
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school
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 as the
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 highest crowd which was above 90%. The ratio of women who
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teach
 in Secondary
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approximately
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is approximately
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 50%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational setting
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • nursery school
  • higher education
  • proportion
  • outnumber
  • trend
  • comparison
  • historical factors
  • social influence
  • teaching profession
  • data interpretation
  • balance
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