Sales of Drinks January February March April Ice drinks 150 150 190 230 Tea and Coffee 250 270 220 180 Juices 200 190 210 200 Cocktails 90 90 110 100

The table gives information about monthly sales of drinks at small café from January to April. It is clear that
tea
and
coffee
have the largest number at 270 in February. We can
also
see that cocktails
are showed
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the lowest number at 90 in January and February. Overall,
tea
and
coffee
and juices’ sales are noticeably higher in January at 250 and 200.
But
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But, ice
ice
drinks and cocktails are lower than them at 150 and 90. In February, changeability is not at
ice
drinks and cocktails.
Tea
and
coffee
have a slight rise
at
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in
of
270. But juices decrease in 190.
However
, demand on
ice
drinks, cocktails, juices increase in March at 190, 110, 210. It can be seen that the
proportion
of
tea
and
coffee
go down at 220. Only
ice
drinks
has
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have
sharp rise at 230 in April. Out of the
ice
drinks, the rest of drinks have a slight increase
tea
and
coffee
at 180
,
Accept space
,
juices at 200, cocktails at 100. Overall,
tea
and
coffee
are nearly the highest
proportion
of sales. Cocktails are always lower
proportion
than the rest of
drinks
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the drinks
. The
proportion
of sales changes
into
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in
seasonal condition.
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