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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others thinks face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People interaction can do two ways those are
look
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looking
 to look and through social networks. Nowadays, many humans are having internet so they can use social interaction, but most of the time it is not correct way due to few persons tell lies.
Face to face to
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Face to face
 communication you know about that person. ,
First
, Internet chats and other social contact
provides
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provide
 more information if we do not know any information about persons
,
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,
companies and health tips. People may not spend much money for learning machinery skills that technology will be used to them to learn new skills than they get efficient knowledge from the internet.
Moreover find
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Moreover, find
 out suitable jobs for part time.
On the other hand
, fraud people can utilize the internet for trapping girls or unnecessary things
then
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than
 they would be cheated innocent or rich person. And they will get personal information about families and personal photos through modern automation.We do not know if they are saying correct or not during in speaking time.
Second
, Face to face intelligence may be correct while communicating with others about personal work than you can find out what is saying is true or false because that person has sat in front you.
On the other hand
, We will not be known more knowledge about other persons and skills. Never improve communication skills and technology. In Conclusion, technology makes new friends, but we need to take some secure ways while making friendship with new persons. Face to face interaction is Old but old is gold few situations.
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