The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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The graphs give information about how much money the British people spent on fast food weekly and the uses of hamburgers, pizza and fish and chips over a period of 20 years.

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it is clear that

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the high and average income groups are

exppenditure

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expenditure

expenditures

on hamburgers

most

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apply

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while

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the

low income

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low-income

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people spent more on fish and chips.

However

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, burgers and pizza have

been

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significantly increased over that time.

According to

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the bar graph, high and middle-income classes spend on hamburgers around 42, and 34

pence

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person

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per person

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, respectively,

whereas

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the low economic level

spend

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less

than15

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than 15

pence

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on the same type of junk food. For fish and chips, the

mid-classe

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mid-class

mid-classes

of income expend more than other groups ( 25

pence

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per person),

in contrast

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, the rich and poor people

spending

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spent

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almost the same about 19

pence

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. As for the

last

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type of fast food (pizza)

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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2 paragraphs

145 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Expenditure
Fast food
Income groups
High-income
Low-income
Medium-income
Hamburgers
Fried chicken
Fish & chips
Consumption
Trends
Significant increase
Decline
Popularity
Spending patterns
Consumption trends
Lifestyle
Preferences
Prices

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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

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