Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.

Well, if we talk about
climate
change
in today's
world whoever
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world, whoever
wishes to investigate medicine and
also
science properly to rebut the greenhouse gas emission and it will be brighter if we say
climate
change
which is high disseminated all over the world. Unknown amount of inhabitants
suppose
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supposes
that countries with comprehensive facilities have a higher obligation to cut down
climate
change
than upcoming countries. Others trust that all countries should have the same duties towards
ehorting
a symptom of some physical hurt or disorder
hurting
the environment. In
this
essay, it will be discussed about the
climate
change
and which
country
must have more responsibility. There is given two types of countries like developed and developing.
Climate
change
isn't an emerging threat to global public health. The
climate
change
simultaneously an increasing
also
the main contributor to big problems, which seems unsolvable. And in
this
situation the both of given countries will be vulnerable to health hazards from
climate
change
. Resent researches shows that common vulnerability factors include coastal location, high levels of outdoor and indoor air pollution and
also
poor sanitation. These
influence
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influences
burdens, approximately 800.000 annual
death
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deaths
from urban air pollution, 1.2 million from road-traffic accidents, 1.9 million from physical inactivity
also
1.5 million per year from indoor air pollution.
Climate
change
and health protection in
debeloping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
countries are likely to become increasingly prominent in policy development. So developed
country
must stay hard
to
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for
any kind of problems and
this
country
can solve
this
problem because
this
country
overcame the obstacles which were more difficult. Let's talk about developing
country
if it is somehow strong
country it
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country, it
can solve the coming problems in the process of developing without
leting
property that is leased or rented out or let
letting
listing
any kind of damage.
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To sum up) But it was managed that the responsibility in
developed
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developed countries
a developed country
country
because if developed
country
will be irresponsible it can
leed
a soft heavy toxic malleable metallic element; bluish white when freshly cut but tarnishes readily to dull grey
lead
led
leads
to distribution of
developing
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developing countries
a developing country
country
. In conclusion, I think that developed land must help to proceeding land because in the
future it
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future, it
can produce
usefull
being of use or service
useful
thing
for
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in
the world.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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