The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008 .

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008 .
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of women, men and
children
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consuming five servings of fruit and
vegetables
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each day in 8 years from 2001 to 2008 in the UK.
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, it can be seen that the highest percentage of all people consuming fruit and
vegetables
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were women,
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children
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consistently accounted for the lowest percentage.
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, a significant increase in the proportion of people eating these food items can be seen over the period given. The percentage of women who ate fruit and
vegetables
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started at just over 20% in 2001.
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rose steadily to reach a peak of almost 35% in 2006, before falling slightly to 30% in the final year. In terms of men and
children
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eating fruits and
vegetables
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, the rate remained relatively stable in the first three years (about 17% and 12% respectively). From
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point, the proportion of men climbed gradually to peak at about 27% in both 2006 and 2007, after which it dropped to about 26%.
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growth in the figure for
children
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was evident reaching 25% in 2007 and around 24% in the final year.
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