The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
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contribution
of three sectors ,agriculture, manufacturing and business, and financial services – to the UK Use synonyms
economy
from 1990 until 2000.
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agriculture, in the first half of Linking Words
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in the late twentieth Use synonyms
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, business and financial sector was the major contributor of the Use synonyms
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Agriculture in the first 25 years there was Use synonyms
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informed 2 % in 2000. Manufacturing during the period there has been no increase, Linking Words
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and financial services sector increased significantly by the end of the year reaching 30 Correct article usage
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