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Some TV programmes, video of violent games and other leisure activities are harmful for children. How harmful they are? What can be done to solve these problems?

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First
 of all globalization and proliferation of new technology has opened
plethora
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a plethora
 of options for children for their leisure
time
. By taking advantage of these young people indulge themselves in online activities.
however ther
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However, there
however there
However there
However ther
are
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is
also
 significant risk involved,
such
 as violent
content
,
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,
 illegal information which affects the overall
developement
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
 of a
children
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child
.
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.
 In
this
 essay we will discuss how harmful these are what are the solutions to overcome them.
To begin
 with,
video
 games, online leisure activities have detrimental effects on children.To illustrate, horror movies scare the children and as a consequence he may have a phobia in the future.Keeping the mental instability, children should not be exposed by any
content
 which affects their mentality.Most of the students waste their most of the precious
time
 while playing
video
 games or watching TV programmes which can be used for other productive work.In a survey of university 97% students playing a destructive
video
 game PUB-G which is based on war
,
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,
 players killed each other in the virtual world which may lead to testy.
this
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This
 game not only waste their
time but
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time, but
 it
also have
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also has
 negative effects on their brain.
Although
 the situation is not still out of our hand.Parents should check the
content
 what their offspring is exposed.They should change the privacy setting of internet so in the absence of parents, children cannot open illegal
content
.They limit their
time
 for games and motivate them to focus on their studies.
Furthermore
 onus of government is to monitor the
content
 during the prime
time
. Every information should be checked before broadcasting so the children will not effects with fake information. In the end some games and
video
content
 are leisure activities for children
,
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,
but these are
also
 harmful. Parents motivate them to focus on study and government should
also
 take part so we can save the basic assets of a country
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