The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The report aims to provide information about how people in the United Kingdom, represented by
genders
, pursued their higher Fix the agreement mistake
gender
education
between 1970/71 and 1990/91 concerning the period of their study time.
Generally, it is seen that the number
of people who were studying part-time was relatively higher than those who enrolled the full-time education
. The majority of a
graph experienced an upward trend, Correct article usage
the
while
the number
of men in the part-time further
study followed a downward trend. By the end of the period, female part-time pupils overshadow those
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
male Change preposition
apply
students
.
Focusing on male students
, the number
stood at 1000 thousand
for college students
in a part-time class in 1970 and fluctuated during the period. By 1990, its number
decreased slightly to approximately 900 thousand
. The full-time students
, however
, tended to show a slight increase from only 100 thousand
in 1970/71 to over 200 thousand
in 1990/91.
Over the 20 years, it is obvious that women seemed to continue their further
education
much higher. They showed significant growth in part-time education
, reached and outraced those of men in 1990 with over a million students
. The full-time study's
Change noun form
study
students
also
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, number, students, thousand with synonyms.
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