You recently hired a restaurant to host an office party at work, but there were several problems with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Give details of the food and services you ordered Describe the problems that occurred Explain what you want the restaurant to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
mail with dissatisfaction against the meal and service we have been offered in our office annual party hosted on 30th April. Due to remarkable review on the internet, we hired you for the small arrangement. We requested starters, main-course
and desserts for around 40-50 people in food and clean & tidy sitting arrangement.
But the service you offered was horrendous. Correct your spelling
main course
Firstly
, Chair
cover was not clean and it was stinking. Correct article usage
the Chair
Secondly
, tea/coffee served
cold. The main concern was the food came late & it was giving a feel of stale. Add a missing verb
is served
Thirdly
, the dishes were not clean while serving & the food was not palatable.
We are ashamed to
our employees due to that incident. We need an apology letter from restaurant management to our branch head and Change preposition
of
strict
cut off 50% in charges. Please be cautious from Change the adjective
strictly
next-time
onwards when you are going to serve a company as the proverb goes "The Customer Is God"
Thanks,
KuheliCorrect your spelling
next time
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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