You recently bought an item of clothing from a shop. You discovered that it had a fault and returned it to the shop for replacement or refund. However, the assistant told you that this was against the store's policy. Write a letter to the store manager explaining the problems you have had. Ask for a refund or exchange on the item
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Sejal and my customer id is 102. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about dress pairs which is bought from your emporium on 22 march
2020. I was extremely happyChange the capitalization
March
,
when I tried it in your showroom because it's Remove the comma
apply
alright
Replace the word
all right
to
me. Change preposition
with
However
, when I reached at
home and showed my mother, she told me that the dress material is feeble and the sewing has come off, according to the price because I have paid 100 dollars for that. I decided to get Remove the preposition
apply
full
amount refund or replaced it with a new one.
Correct article usage
a full
Then
, I went to your store next
day, but Correct article usage
the next
assistant
told me that after selling an item, it's not providing exchanged or refunded in any way according to your shop policy. Correct article usage
the assistant
Therefore
, it made me write this
letter to you. I would appreciate if you could solve my problem at the earliest or I may contact the consumer protection court as a seller of counterfeit product.
I am looking forward to hear
you.
Change the verb form
hearing
Your
Faithfully,
SejalCorrect your spelling
Yours
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