The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.
The chart depicts the manufacturing and consumption of
oil
in China from 1982 until 2006. It is evident that while
the production of oil
rose at a steady rate, the consumption of fuel was increasing at a rapid pace. The extraction of fossil fuels could not keep up with the usage of the country. To elaborate, there was a sharp climb of
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in
oil
production from the beginning of 1982 until 1986 from two million
to three million
barrels
per day. After 1986, the number of barrels
being manufactured only gradually increased for the next twenty years until it reached its peak of three and a half million
barrels
in 2006, the end of the graph. On the other hand
, starting from 1982, the consumption of fossil fuel
barely grew for eighteen years. Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
Furthermore
, the usage of oil
was slightly below two million
barrels
per day in
the beginning year of the graph and only rose to two Change preposition
at
million
in 1990. From there, the rate began to significantly climb up until it reached a staggering amount of over six million
barrels
in 2006.Submitted by tinhnm02412 on
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