The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the
consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and some diverse Use synonyms
sort
of meat in a European country between 19V9 and Y..E. Fix the agreement mistake
sorts
According to
the table Linking Words
fish
diagram had steady changes. Lamb Use synonyms
consumption
has rapidly decreased. Use synonyms
Beef
Use synonyms
consumption
Use synonyms
had
dramatically increased in twenty-five years. And Unnecessary verb
apply
the
chicken Correct article usage
apply
consumption
is the only meat that has increased in Use synonyms
this
time period. Linking Words
According to
the graph Linking Words
Beef
and chicken had markable changes in Use synonyms
this
time period. Linking Words
Fish
and Lamb had slightly changed. It Use synonyms
also
shows that in the Linking Words
beginning
Add a comma
,beginning
the
Correct article usage
apply
beef
had the highest Use synonyms
consumption
with two hindered thirty and Use synonyms
fish
was the lowest sixty- five. Use synonyms
Beef
and lamb Use synonyms
consumption
Use synonyms
are
started in the middle of the diagram with hindered fifty Change the verb form
is
consumption
per week.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, beef with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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