The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below illustrates the
consumption
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of
fish
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and some diverse
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of meat in a European country between 19V9 and Y..E.
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the table
fish
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diagram had steady changes. Lamb
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has rapidly decreased.
Beef
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consumption
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had
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dramatically increased in twenty-five years. And
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chicken
consumption
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is the only meat that has increased in
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time period.
According to
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the graph
Beef
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and chicken had markable changes in
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time period.
Fish
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and Lamb had slightly changed. It
also
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shows that in the
beginning
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the
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beef
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had the highest
consumption
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with two hindered thirty and
fish
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was the lowest sixty- five.
Beef
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and lamb
consumption
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are
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started in the middle of the diagram with hindered fifty
consumption
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per week.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, fish, beef with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • metric tons
  • fluctuations
  • upward/downward trend
  • stabilize
  • peak
  • trough
  • overtake
  • steady decline/increase
  • sustainable
  • dietary habits
  • preferences
  • health consciousness
  • per capita
  • poultry
  • veal
  • stagnant
  • gradual
  • surpass
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