The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart indicted
the number of men and women in Correct your spelling
indicated
further
Add an article
the further
a further
course
in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time in Fix the agreement mistake
courses
a
time period of 1970/71 to 1990/91.
At first glance, we can be seen that full-time schooling Correct article usage
the
trends
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tends
to
increase every year in females and males by the contrast priory class Fix the infinitive
apply
were
fluctuated by starting at one million in 1970/1971 falls to nine thousand in 1980/1981 Unnecessary verb
apply
then
rose to nine hundred fifty in 1990/91. Correct word choice
and then
On the other hand
, the female's
part-time application Change noun form
female
has
originated Unnecessary verb
apply
around
seven hundred eighty thousand in 1970/1971 Change preposition
at around
climbed
up to eight hundred eighty-eight in 1980/81. Correct word choice
and climbed
Lastly
, the female part-time education was one million and one people.
In conclusion, there are a number of part-time learning higher than full-time in two
genders. Correct article usage
the two
Moreover
, we can assume that when the time has
changed, people are more interested in applying for a long-time course.Unnecessary verb
apply
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