The line graphs below show the production and demand for steel in million tonnes and the number of workers employed in the steel industry in the UK in 2010.

The first line graph compares

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steel

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production

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and the

demand

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in the UK in 2010

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the

second

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one reveals the employee

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in the industry in the same

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.

Overall

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, the

production

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of

steel

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was higher throughout the

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than that of the

demand

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except in December and the highest

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of employees was employed in

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industry at the beginning of the

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the first graph, the UK produced 4000

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tonnes

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steel

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in January 2010 and at that time the

demand

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was exactly half of that. After the first quarter, the

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and

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for

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remained almost the same.

At the end

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of the

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quarter, August, the UK’s

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production

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at just over 3 thousand

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tonnes against a

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tonnes less

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. From January to November, the

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was higher than the

demand

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and the gap between these two was on average a

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tonne

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.

However

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, the scenario shifted dramatically

at the end

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of the

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. From September to November,

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steel

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production

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plummeted and so did the

demand

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. In December, the

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for

steel

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exceeded the total

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. The

second

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line graph reveals that 5

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employees worked in the

steel

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industry and

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number

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dropped to two

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less in April. From that time onward, the employee

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showed some fluctuations and in August, the UK

steel

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sector employed around 3.5

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workers.

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number

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continuously dropped throughout the rest of the

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and declined to 1

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in December.