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the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010

the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
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The given charts compare the percentages of British undergraduates who could speak more than one
language
 in a specific university in the and 2010 respectively. At the first glance,
it is clear that
 Spanish was by far the most spoken
language
beside
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 English
in
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 that university.
Moreover
,
students
 became interested in
other
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another language
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language
 over the period of 10 years.
According to
 the charts, in 2000, 30% of
students
 were able to communicate in Spanish only, which doubled
than
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that figure for French
speaks
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, followed by 10% of
students
 who could
spoke
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 German fluently. In the
next
 ten years, the number of speaking
students
 increased a fall
whereas
 the data for
German fluent
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students
 remained unchanged. The table data clearly show that the number of
students
 knowing at least one other
language
beside
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 their mother tongue rose to 20% from 15%.
Furthermore
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 15% of
student
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students
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 were trilingual in the year 2010.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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