the charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
The given charts compare the percentages of British undergraduates who could speak more than one
language
in a specific university in the and 2010 respectively.
At the first glance, it is clear that
Spanish was by far the most spoken language
beside
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, students
became interested in other
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other languages
language
over the period of 10 years.
According to
the charts, in 2000, 30% of students
were able to communicate in Spanish only, which doubled than
that figure for French Change preposition
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speaks
, followed by 10% of Replace the word
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students
who could spoke
German fluently. In the Change the verb form
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ten years, the number of speaking students
increased a fall whereas
the data for German fluent
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German-fluent
students
remained unchanged.
The table data clearly show that the number of students
knowing at least one other language
beside
their mother tongue rose to 20% from 15%. Replace the word
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student
were trilingual in the year 2010.Fix the agreement mistake
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