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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
linegraph
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line graph
 ( line graph )
illustrate
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illustrates
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 ( illustrates ) the past, current and projected
population
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populations
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 of the two
countries
 which are
China
 and
India
 between 1990 and 2050.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that there is
and
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an
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 upward trend for
both
countries
. The dotted line
demonstrate
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demonstrates
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 ( demonstrates ) the trend of
China
while
 the solid line
demonstrate
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demonstrates
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 ( demonstrates ) the
population
 of
India
. In 1990, the
population
 of
India
 were ( was ) about 0.85
billions
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billion
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(
billion
 ) of
people
whereas
 (
people
,
whereas
 ) there was a huge
diffrent
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difference
 ( difference ) from
China
 with more than 1.1
billions
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billion
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 (
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billions
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billion
 )
of
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apply
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people
. In the
next
 years, the
population
 of
both
China
 and
India
 increased
steady
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steadily
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 ( steadily ). In 2020, the inhabitants of
both
the
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apply
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countries
has
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have
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 ( have ) a small difference,
China
 were 1.4
billions
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billion
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 (
billion
 ) and
India
were
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was
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 ( was ) 1.3
billions
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billion
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 (
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billions
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billion
 )
of
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apply
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people
. The two lines describe the
population
 of
both
 the
countries
intersect
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intersecting
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 each other in 20330 which remained that the
population
 will be the same
this
 year. It is projected that
China
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China's
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population
 will start declining after 2030
while
India
 will continue to increase and will reach
to
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apply
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1.6 million in 2050.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, countries, china, india, both, billions, billion, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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