You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well. I'm writing
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letter to bring your attention as I'm facing
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issues
at work recently. I would like to discuss with you and make them fix as it might cause a loss to the company. I have already reported
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issues
to the
manager
but he is not interested in solving them.
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like not checking the products properly, writing wrong lots on the invoice, entering wrong lots and expiration date of the product, stocking the products at
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location, not picking the right product or sometimes products with
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lots, lot inventory is done for finding the
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discrepancies
but
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they are not doing it properly. Each and every mistake counts. All these
issues
are
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occurring
as they are not doing their part of
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properly. I have given some suggestions to
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and asked him to make a report against those who are doing mistakes and take
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against those. But in fact,
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colleagues
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have started disliking me as they think I'm doing work more than expected and they aren't able to do
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that might be the reason the
manager
is not interested in taking any actions. I expect the company should get their WARD license soon but we have to solve all
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issues
to be
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wont
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be
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due to
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discrepancies
in pedigree. I have suggested
manager
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get the upgrade the system
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wont
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any problems in lot
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. we are facing
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as they have to check it manually and chances of human errors are more so we need to upgrade the system and get the scanners
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solve
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issues
. I request you to have a meeting with the
manager
and discuss all these and fix these
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issues
. Thank you in advance. Yours Sincerely, Haresh Nanakwani
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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