IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 5

The figure show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

#figure #show #uk #graduate #students #work #college #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The chart illustrates what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. There are 50,890 sums of graduate students, and there are 7,230 numbers of postgraduate students. The statistic differences between the two categories are dramatically different,
in addition
, it is divided into 4 features.
Firstly
, the number of alumnus students who
further
 study is 29,665 to have more opportunities in the industry. 17,735 find a part-time job, 16,235 are unemployed, and 3,500 do a voluntary work.
This
 shows that thousands of students want to have more knowledge and skills to have a better profession in the future.
Hence
, they pursue more studies.
Secondly
, the number of postgraduate students who
further
 study is 2,725, which is not that different to students who have a part-time job. There are 1,625 who are unemployed, and 345 who did a voluntary work.
This
 division illustrates that people want to study more and at the same time have a part-time job.
Thus
, students will have their allowances from their own pocket. In conclusion, statistics show that both graduate and postgraduate students are willing to pursue more studies for better opportunities.
On the other hand
, there are not so high difference between part-time workers, and unemployed.
Submitted by queen ice on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: