Women and man are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, some people believe that it is right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is often argued that it is ok to have exclusive jobs for men or women, some others have the opposite view and believe that men and women should have equal opportunities when applying for a job.

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is Job fairness, diversity and the probability of losing talented applicants. On the one hand, there is no denial that god created boys and girls differently. Each with their own characteristics, strengths and weaknesses. Men can handle jobs which require extreme physical stamina. Women can multi-task several activities at the same time.

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, those unique characteristics are the ones that create a diverse working environment with equal and fair chance for the applicants.

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, a study done by Forbes in 2016 showed that female labour has increased to 40% for California based companies.

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means that technology companies are starting to hire more females.

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, Companies might be losing talents by limiting the applicants to a specific

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requirement.

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is because there was a trend back in the nineties to exclude women from managerial positions.

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, a study done by Bloomberg in 2018 showed that percentage of female CEO’s has increased by 10% compared to 2017. The same study showed a 70 % increase compared to 2005. An example of successful female leaders is PEPSICO & REDHAT CEO’s. In Conclusion, some might find it usual to screen a specific

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out of a vacancy. I do

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disagree with

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way of thinking,

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I support the other view that career opportunities shouldn’t be limited to either

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because of the Job fairness, diversity and the probability of losing talented applicants.

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Women and man are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, some people believe that it is right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Your opinion

Some people think that people should be given the right to use fresh water as they like. Others believe governments should strictly control the use of fresh water. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have dissapeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this solution?

Some people think that children should be homeschooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.