The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate how different industry sectors contributed to the economy of
Turkey
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in the years 2000 and 2016.
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, at the beginning of the
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construction contributed the least to
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and agriculture was the most significant economic sector. In comparison,
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of the span health care and education became the largest economic segment and the lowest contribution was made by financial, business and other services.
Construction
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The construction
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sector accounted for 3% of
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's economy in 2000
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and experienced a more than threefold increase to one-tenth in 2016. Economic income from trade, utilities and transportation was 14% in 2000 and experienced a slight growth of 2% in 2016. At the beginning of the period, manufacturing and finance, business and other services made up 8% and 5% of
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's recession, respectively, and these figures rose to 12% and 8% in 2016. Agriculture, which comprised almost a quarter of
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's recession in 2000, fell to 14% in 2016. In 2000 economic outputs from the government and leisure and hospitality sectors were at 12% and 17%, respectively, and both decreased by 3%. Contribution from
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the healthcare
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and education
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remained constant in both years at 17%.
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