Introduction
Money is a vital component in everyone's life. Some people contend that workers working in hospitals and schools are valued less than the workers working in the entertainment industry. In my perspective, I agree with
this
contention, and believe that community indeed undervalues both teachers and medical professionals. Linking Words
However
, questioning the pay scale of people working in large corporations is unethical.Linking Words
Body paragraph 1
It is evident that doctors and teachers play a paramount role in the community. Yet, most of them have a salary
that is
below the average national income. Linking Words
For instance
, when a nation is stuck with an epidemic or a pandemic, doctors and nurses take responsibility and become the Frontline workers saving millions of lives. Linking Words
However
, our community does not value Linking Words
this
sacrifice, and, Linking Words
as a result
, most of the health care workers work with either less wage or no wage. Linking Words
Similarly
, teachers empower our younger generation with knowledge, values, and discipline. Even though they are important in shaping the future of a nation, teachers’ contribution is never appreciated in civilization. In that sense, the salary of individuals should be based on the contributions that individuals render to society.Linking Words
Body paragraph 2
Despite the above argument, critics argue that film actors and large corporation bosses earn huge sums of money for work
that is
not important to public. Linking Words
Although
, health care workers and teachers deserve a raise, comparing the wages of sectors which are completely different is incorrect. Linking Words
For example
, the entertainment industry is worth million of dollars and large amount of returns are from the public itself. People often watch movies, dramas, and listen to songs for relaxation. Linking Words
Furthermore
, people are not aware of the struggles and hardships that actors face behind the screen to earn huge sums of money. Linking Words
Hence
, hospitals and schools cannot be compared with profit making organizations whose sole purpose is only to provide entertainment.Linking Words
Conclusion
In conclusion, the criteria for income should be based on the contributions people make in the culture. The government should support
such
workers and provide them with certain benefits that will help association to value their jobs.Linking Words