You successfully passed a job interview . You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date

Dear Natali I am writing
this
letter to inform
about
Correct pronoun usage
you about
show examples
the starting
job
date. I am expected to start on
Correct your spelling
15th
15 th
Correct your spelling
15th
November, but
due to
some unexpected
peroblems
Correct your spelling
problems
I will start the
job
after
Correct article usage
the coming
show examples
coming
Correct article usage
the coming
show examples
week of lith November
that is
Correct your spelling
2nd
2and
Correct your spelling
2nd
of November
. .
Replace the punctuation
.
...
show examples
I am seriously
sowwy
Correct your spelling
sorry
for not Commencing my
job
on time. I know how important it is to
being
Wrong verb form
be
show examples
there but after passing my interview. 9 was on my way
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
home, and I had
Car
Add an article
a Car
show examples
accident. Because of
air bags
Correct your spelling
airbags
show examples
, 9 did not get injured but my call was totally damaged. In order to move
in
Change preposition
to
show examples
a new city I have to finish my paperwork with
insurance
Add an article
the insurance
an insurance
show examples
company and it will take about one week! so ! Cannot leave my
cliveent
Correct your spelling
client
city till
21st
Correct article usage
the 21st
show examples
yNovember
Correct your spelling
November
It was an unavoidable incident and 9 know how necessary
this
job
is for me and,
therefore
, I am ready to do work online
fecom
Correct your spelling
from
home. I know my
job
duties and I have asked one of my
friend
Fix the agreement mistake
friends
show examples
who is working there to help me. I hope you will forgive me and be assured of my commitment to
This
company and its Jukane
your's
Change noun form
Yours
show examples
sincerely Dinga Vonne.
Submitted by Divya verma on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: