You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know • when you will be arriving and leaving, • what type of rooms you would like • and ask them how much the weekend will cost • also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to make arrangements with your hotel regarding the stay during the weekend and to know about the places of interest and leisure activities nearby. I will be arriving there with my husband and two children to celebrate my 10th wedding anniversary on 10th July, Friday, morning at 10.00am and will be leaving on 16th July, evenings. I would like you to book two deluxe rooms’ inclusive of all meals and at least one of the

room

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should have

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seaside view.

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, the room should have

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coffee maker and an iron. I would appreciate

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you will send the details of all the activities that we can take part in during our stay for fun and adventure.

Further

, I would love to get the information about the historical places and local

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nearby the hotel so that we can explore the culture and the regional food.

Moreover

, send me the details of the total cost during the weekend stay no later than the 7th of July. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ankita Sharma

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0Word repetition
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5Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

187 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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