The best way to reduce traffic congestion in cities is to provide a free public transport service. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

Transportation has evolved drastically over the years with the advent of modern technology. The metropolitan cities today are experiencing enormous

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congestion. In order to resolve

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issue, a school of thought says that the ultimate way to curb

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problem is the provision of free public

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by the government. I partly agree with the statement,

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, if public

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is made

compulsory

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compulsory, then

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other problems might

rise

come into existence; take on form or shape

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in a varied aspect. To embark, the most worrisome issue in the cities today is the

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caused by the vehicles. The toxic release from the bikes and cars are released into the atmosphere leading to global warming and

greenhouse effect

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the greenhouse effect

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, citizens are suffering from respiratory diseases

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of inhaling these hazardous gases. If public

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is made mandatory,

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the number of vehicles on

road decreases which

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the road decreases, which

the road decreases which

not only decreases

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but

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reduce

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. People can reach their destination in time and carry out their routine

peacefully

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peaceful

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, a recent research proves that more than 50% of the employees report late to their workplace due to

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. And

another

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statistical data says around 75% of the citizens suffer from breathing problems because of

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in their community.

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could be solved with public

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replacing the private ones.

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, public

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cannot always meet the demands. The

fulfillment

a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires

fulfilment

of privacy of an individual fails in

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like buses or trains, whereas, cars can provide space for a person to carry out his personal work.

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, not everyone can catch a bus in time and will want to complete lots of other work on their way which is not possible in a public

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. To cite a real life situation, working professionals would prefer dropping their children to

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school

on the way to their office and sometimes buy household products while returning back home. All these comforts are not met in public

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. To recapitulate, perhaps it is vital to avoid

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congestion in cities as it poses various problems like

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and delay in reaching workplace during the peak hours of the day.

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, the privacy of a human being and comforts should

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be considered in certain instances. All in all, we need to be aware of when to use public

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judiciously keeping

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on

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the personal requirements as well.