Some people believe that governments should spend money on building trains and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads are the better way to reduce traffic connections. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few individuals think that in order to decrease
road
traffic
funds should be given
in
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establishing trains and underground tubes by
government
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.
Whereas
, Others opine that creating extra and broader
road
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roads
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is the best solution to deal with mass jams. In my viewpoint, rails and metros are more helpful in reducing congestion. It is considered by many that railways and tubes carry many
people
at
same
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time
so it is useful in dealing with the
traffic
caused by commuters.
According to
them, most of the office workers would leave at
same
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time
of the day so getting
subway
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the subway
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inspite
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in spite
of
private
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the private
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car is beneficial as it is
time
efficient
as well as
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the
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safest means of transport.
For example
, In
Delhi
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Delhi,
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government
build
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built
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new metros as a result morning and evening
traffic
declines
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declined
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gradually,
according to
some research. Some
people
support the opinion that designing new and extensive
road
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roads
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would help in
dimnishing
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diminishing
the
traffic
gridlock. They believe that by building
seperate
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separate
lanes for buses,
cars
, heavy moving vehicles and bicycles
avoidation
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validation
of
traffic
become possible. They argue that
People
in train feels like " sardines in a can". So for their
convinience
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convenience
roads should be created
widee
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wide
wider
. To illustrate, In London,
seperate
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separate
lanes are given to heavy moving vehicles on highways
due to
which the problem caused by
slow moving
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vehides
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vehicles
is terminated, In my viewpoint, developing underground rails is better as it is cheaper to use
as well as
it does not
emittes
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emits
emitted
emitters
any harm full gases in
air
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the air
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which reduce the global problem of pollution and
road
traffic
.
Moreover
, using private
cars
for
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same destination is futile as it only increases the
numbers
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number
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of
cars
on
road
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the road
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and
create
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creates
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noise
polllutionalso
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pollution also
. In conclusion, creating wider roads are wastage of money as it does not motivate
people
to reduce
the
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dependance
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dependence
on
Cars
. Using Subway and rails for daily life and for work saves
the
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apply
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time
,
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money and helps
in decreasing
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decrease
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the
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apply
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road
traffic
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