Some people believe that governments should spend money on building trains and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads are the better way to reduce traffic connections. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Few individuals think that in order to decrease
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funds should be given in establishing training and underground tubes by government. Whereas, Others opine that creating extra and broader
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is the best solution to deal with mass jams. In my viewpoint, rails and metros are more helpful in reducing congestion. It is considered by many that railways and Tubes carry many people at the same time
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so it is useful in dealing with the
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caused by commuters. According to them, most of the office workers would leave at the same
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of the day so getting subway in-spite of private car is beneficial as it is time efficient as well as the safest means of transport.
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, In Delhi government build new metros
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morning and evening
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declines gradually, according to some research. Some people support the opinion that designing new and extensive
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would help in diminishing the
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gridlock. They believe that by building separate lanes for buses, cars, heavy moving vehicles and bicycles validation of
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become possible. They argue that People in train feel like " sardines in a can". So for their convenience, roads should be created wider. To illustrate, In London, separate lanes are given to heavy moving vehicles on highways due to which the problem caused by slow moving vehicles is terminated. In My viewpoint developing underground rails are better as it is cheaper to use as well as it does not emit any harmful gases in the air which reduce the global problem of pollution and
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, using private cars for same destination is futile as it only increases the numbers of cars on
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and create noise pollution
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. In conclusion, creating wider roads are
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a waste
of money as it does not motivate people to reduce the dependence on Cars. Using Subway and rails for daily life and for work saves the time, money and helps in decreasing the
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