The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graphic in the image illustrates the number of both female and male working class
of
the Republic of Freedonia. Change preposition
in
This
specific graphic refers to a few segments of employment like manufacturing, communications, banking, wholesale and retail trade, public sector non-defence and defence.
The report is made in the year 1975,
and has been made on a number of a thousand people Remove the comma
apply
women
(red dot), and men
(black dot). For a larger view of the picture, it can be very easy to observe the fact that men
outnumber the
Correct article usage
apply
women
in every sector of work. This
result reveals that the women
in that time of
period are being seen just as a housewife, and work is not for them, Change preposition
apply
while
the men
are more needed, mostly in the manufacturing and public sector, where the feminine gender is close to zero.
On the other hand
, on a closer look over the image, we can see that women
have a very good development in speaking skills. Looking at the screen we can tell that women
and Correct article usage
the women
men
employed in that part is
almost the same, around 300 in total.
Change the verb form
are
Overall
basing
on the graphics, the masculine working class in Freedonia tends to have an advantage in obtaining a job; Wrong verb form
based
therefore
a woman needs to fight more to be hired.Submitted by gabi on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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