The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.

The graphic in the image illustrates the number of both female and male working class

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the Republic of Freedonia.

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specific graphic refers to a few segments of employment like manufacturing, communications, banking, wholesale and retail trade, public sector non-defence and defence. The report is made in the year 1975

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and has been made on a number of a thousand people

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(red dot), and

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(black dot). For a larger view of the picture, it can be very easy to observe the fact that

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outnumber

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women

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in every sector of work.

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result reveals that the

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in that time

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period are being seen just as a housewife, and work is not for them,

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the

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are more needed, mostly in the manufacturing and public sector, where the feminine gender is close to zero.

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, on a closer look over the image, we can see that

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have a very good development in speaking skills. Looking at the screen we can tell that

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and

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employed in that part

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almost the same, around 300 in total.

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on the graphics, the masculine working class in Freedonia tends to have an advantage in obtaining a job;

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a woman needs to fight more to be hired.