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In today`s job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this question.

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Practical skills have become more preferable rather than theoretical knowledge in
modern job market
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the modern job market
. While it is anticipated that formal qualifications may not be required in the future, I believe that theoretical knowledge is prior to practical skills. There are several reasons which
proves
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prove
 that formal qualifications are vital.
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, it is highly important to acquire the fundamental aspects of some professions,
such
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 as
doctor
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a doctor
doctors
. Because doctors` job requires deeper insight into a health, it can be achieved mostly by learning the cores in
theory
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. The main reason why formal qualification is preferable is that it helps a person learn not to repeat past mistakes made on the field and react to problems relying on the experience of others. As an example, economists learn basics of economic
theory
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 in order to learn what actions was taken
in
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on
 specific issues.
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, some think that practical skills far more important. It is true that certain things can be learned through experience and practice. As an example, in art related jobs the higher results are achieved by ongoing trainings, working on their mistakes continuously rather than focusing on
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.
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, singers have to go through repetitions and trainings in order to reveal their talent eventually. To sum up,
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 there are arguments to prove either side, theoretical knowledge and practical skills equally important and complement each other. I assume that
theory
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 would play a key role in in the long-term period for most jobs.
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