You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.  Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter * describe the situation * explain why you cannot continue at this time * say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Eliott, I am writing to inform you that unfortunately, I won't be able to continue your management course

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semester due to my busy work schedule. Let me explain my situation in

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details

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and let you know why I took

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halfheartedly decision.

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you may know, I am on a work-study permit for

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term. So the university council has already scheduled a mandatory part-time job at the library.

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, I am basically 20 hours working there, which I enjoy but it doesn't give me much of a good salary to pay all my bills.

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, living as a student here in the city is costly.

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I signed up for a full-time job that pays a large salary to cover all my charges. Thankfully, it gives me a large wage to cover all my living expenses and

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to save for the

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academic session.

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I have asked the registration office about your upcoming classes

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. So before announcing

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that I will drop

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class, I already booked a spot for the fall 2021 management program in order to complete my business degree. I am hoping you will understand my circumstances.

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, I am asking you humbly if you would allow me to drop

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course without counting it as a failed class. Please,

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Eliott let me know how you intend to resolve

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matter and I look forward to receiving a reply from you soon. Yours sincerely, Fatima Ezzahra Chouki

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

251 words

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Structure your letter

Some people believe zoos are good places for people to learn about animals. Other people believe animals belong in nature and it is wrong to keep them in zoos. What do you think? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.

You have just finished a language course provided by your company and want another. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter you should say: - why you liked the course - why you need more - and say where and when the course should take place

In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industries and construction. what measure can be taken to prevent it.

Today, there are more television channels than ever before. Some people think this leads to more choices for television viewers. Others, however, believe this causes the quality of television programmes to decline. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. although some of these chanes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?