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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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Dear Manager, I am writing to let you know, I am unhappy with
last
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my last
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 visit to your restaurant. Even though we had many times dinner in your restaurant
because
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a because
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 it's very close to my house. Let me explain the problem,
Me
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I
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 and my wife wanted to celebrate our service anniversary; as we completed one year with the company. We ordered a chicken dish, But we were waiting almost 45 minutes and
dish
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the dish
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not
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was not
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 served to us.
Finally
, I went to the cash counter on the floor and ask why we are not getting the
order
? I was surprised as my
order
not
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was not
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 in the queue. Could you please make some system to get
order
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an order
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 confirmation?
Also
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,Also
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 customers will be happy to get display their
order
 on TV, I saw that kind of way in other city's restaurant. Thank you for considering.
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 faithfully, Vinod Singh
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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