the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided 3 pie charts represent

regarding

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apply

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the mean rates in typical food of three types of nutrients which is known as

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a danger

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danger

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dangerous

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if we intake too much. The rate

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apply

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which foods contain are

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divided

divied

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divided

into 4

section

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sections

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breakfast

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Lunch

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Dinner

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and snacks

Overall

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breakfast

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shows

lowest

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the lowest

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rate in 3

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nutrition

nutrion

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nutrition

Sodium

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,saturated fat, and added

sugar

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And mostly large percentages of ingredients are in the

dinner

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except

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forexcept

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added

sugar

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More specifically,

to begin

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with, as for

sodium

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Highest

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the Highest

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levels are contained in

the

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apply

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dinner

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which occupied 43% and

following

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the following

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levels are detected in

Lunch

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which is 30% As mentioned, the lowest levels are in

the

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apply

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breakfast

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which

have

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only 14% and

simultaneousely

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simultaneously

, the same rates showed in

Snack

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Snacks

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. When it comes to

satuated

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saturated

fat,

this

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shows

slightly

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a slightly

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different

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aspect

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aspects

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. The saturated fat shows

slight

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a slight

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decrease in

dinner

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compared to

sodium

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. In the

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lunch

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the rate shows

slightly

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a slightly

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decreased

aspect

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compared to

sodium

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26%.

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However

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in the

breakfact

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breakfast

and snack the ranges differ which have 16% in the snacks and 21% in the snacks

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Lastly

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as for added

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sugar

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,sugar

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this

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illustrated

ilustrated

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illustrates

comparatively different

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aspect

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aspects

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with

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former

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the former

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two sectors Compared to

sodium

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satuated

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saturated

fat the added

sugar

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is mostly contained in the snack which is not

main

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the main

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factor in

two

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the two

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other ingredients. And at the same

time

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,time

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this

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shows

different

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a different

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aspect

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aspects

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the

dinner

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where the two ingredients are prevalent. The added

sugar

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showed

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in varied

varied

invaried

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an invaried

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difference

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between

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the

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apply

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breakfast

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and

lunch

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compared to other factors

Choi SugyeongTue Aug 11 2020

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the eighth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast, lunch, dinner, sodium, sugar, aspect with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 7 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the eighth paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
44
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

244 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutrients
unhealthy
typical meals
percentages
saturated fats
fibers
sugars
impact
average
consumption
trends
breakfast
lunch
dinner
highest
lowest
variation
implications
balanced diet
recommendations

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the charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Today every large city facing traffic jam problem. what are the causes and how can it tackle

In today's very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?