The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
The pie charts illustrate the percentages of various types of
sources
to produce energy
in France, in the years 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, coal and gas were the most significant sources
of energy
production
in France, in the
both years. In comparison, nuclear and other Remove the article
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sources
contributed the least in
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energy
production
. At the end
of the period, energy
generation from petroleum decreased, while
rest
other Correct article usage
the rest
sources
showed an increase
percentage of Replace the word
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energy
production
.
In 1995, energy
production
from gas and coal was
accounted for 29.63% and 29.80%, respectively, and these figures rose by around 1 % in 2005. At the beginning of the period, other and nuclear Unnecessary verb
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sources
comprised of
4.90 % and 6.40 %, respectively, and Change preposition
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at the end
of the period, grow by approximately 5 % in energy
production
from these sources
.
In contrast
, in the initial year, petroleum made up around one
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one-third
third
of total energy
generation which, then
decreased by approximately 10% in 2005.Submitted by cool01 on
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