The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

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to produce

energy

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in France, in the years 1995 and 2005.

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, coal and gas were the most significant

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of

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production

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in France, in

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both years. In comparison, nuclear and other

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contributed the least

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energy

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production

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.

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of the period,

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generation from petroleum decreased,

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rest

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other

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showed an

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percentage of

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production

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. In 1995,

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production

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from gas and coal

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accounted for 29.63% and 29.80%, respectively, and these figures rose by around 1 % in 2005. At the beginning of the period, other and nuclear

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comprised

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4.90 % and 6.40 %, respectively, and

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of the period, grow by approximately 5 % in

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production

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from these

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.

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, in the initial year, petroleum made up around

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of total

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generation which,

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decreased by approximately 10% in 2005.