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In some countries an average employee is legally obliged to retire at the age of 55 or 60, while in others, like Japan, people can work until they are physically and mentally fit to perform duties. what is the system prevailing in your country? until what age should people be allowed to countinue in salaried jobs. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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I believe that, there are two
kind
Suggestion
kinds
 of people. One of them is attracted
with
Suggestion
to
 a stable
life
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
style
, we can call it (a routine
life
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
style
), have a same job and he avoids any changes. Other people like the challenge and they believe changes always good, they can always
find the
Accept comma addition
find, the
 better than what they have now we can call them (the incredible people). Now we are going to share both
kind
Suggestion
kinds
 of
this people
Suggestion
these people
this person
 and what is the advantage and disadvantage of both sides.
Firstly
: A routine
life
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
style
This
 people they believe the stability of
life
 is the best way, They afraid to lose what on their hand to
change
 it most of the time afraid of changes, On their own mind, might I will not success what if I will lose both,
also
 there is a lot of responsibility on their hand which is not easy to make any changes. They have a family, kids, monthly bills, so its abet hard to make any
change
 on them
life
style
.
On the other Hand
: the incredible people The mentality of them is always changes is good, they don’t like a routine
life
,
such
 a daily task same salary stable
life
, they always look for better,
this
 kind of people more admits to
change
 and to have a new challenge most of the time, It’s like a talent for them to have a new task a new work
such
 as like
this
. On my opinion For sure we have to get some changes in our
life
. A routine
life
 is killing the happiness some time, Particularly on our work, sometime people fell the board of stable
life
,
Accept space
,
 Sometimetime you have to get something new even it’s a bit small
change
,
Accept space
,
 you have to believe about yourself, your own confidence that you can do it. In conclusion All goals depend on your plan, the new is good, But you have to be careful of your new choices, you have to recalculate you’re
life
 steps so you can get the best for your
life
.
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