Some people support the idea of imposing taxes on fossil fuels (oil, coil and gas) in order to reduce energy consumption. Other people disagree with this approach. Consider the debate and its arguments, and come to your own conclusion.

As many countries around the world are developing and modernising, there is more consumerism and a corresponding need for

oil

, coal and gas.

Therefore

, some people believe that imposing high taxes on these will be helpful in declining the

consumption

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whereas

others opine that, it is not only the right solution as it

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suffers

many poor people. I strongly believe that

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It is crucial to increase taxes to decline the

consumption

and saving the environment.

Firstly

, the fact that

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the gas and

oil

has become

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a

significant source for the better standard of living in highly developed countries and

also

it helps to provide some basic necessities

such

as electricity and transportation to the people around the rural

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area

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Therefore

, it is obvious that increasing taxes definitely would affect the life of the

deprivated

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deprived

people.

For instance

, imposing taxes would not only end up with

oil

, coal and gas price.

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Furthermore

, gradually it will

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in

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every basic

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need

such

as electricity, busfare, rice and so on, for the consumers.

Conversely

, some people who are concerned about the environment proposes the idea of increasing the taxes on these, in order to save the world and the high

consumption

may lead to jeopardising many beautiful landscapes. Already there is a shortage in these sources and

thus

make the countries to think about, untouched areas

such

as the

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North

pole to get more

oil

and gas.

For instance

, an area, all countries would like to drill is the

Antartica

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Antarctica

, home of many glaciers, and animals including Penguin, Seal, Polar bear. Drilling here would harm the habitat and in case of any spillage would be

disatrous

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disastrous

to the environment.

Thus

, taxes would be helpful to reduce

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consumption

as well as saving the world. In conclusion,

although

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an

increase in taxes would

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some people in

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rural areas, I firmly believe that

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it is necessary to reduce consumerism and eventually saving the natural resources and habitats.