You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

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Dear Neha, My name is Jazz and I am holding a bank account with RBC since 2016. I am writing for dissatisfaction with the bank's poor service because I have ordered cheque book two weeks ago and still I did not get it. Actually, I am moving into a new building and I will require to submit a deposit in advance. I have ordered a

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with a financial advisor in person on 3rd September. I will be required

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week because I will not be able to use the service elevator there. Please advise me how long it will take as I will not be able to receive it after

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week.

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, I want to know what action you will be taking for

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poor service? I found

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really frustrated because

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is not fair when you needed a

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and you make your customer wait for a long time. Best regards, Jazz

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

158 words

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