Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid

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While experts argue that certain professions in the education and medical domain are undervalued and underpaid, I believe that a large reason for
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is beyond the control of individuals or governments, since, if any profession holds the potential to generate large profits ,
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, by the law of economics, the
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, I do not agree that any profession is underpaid or undervalued without justification.
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many perceive professions
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as film actors or corporate bosses to be overpaid, there is an underlying reason for the same.
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the job of an actor is perceived as simple and not risky, they are not the driving factors for money or
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herds the potential to generate millions in revenue. When we compare the job of an actor to that of a nurse or a doctor, these professions, individually, serve a relatively small market and possess very little monetary
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perspective, a movie star generates millions of dollars by acting for a couple of months in a movie. Whereas, a doctor,
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serving a crucial cause, cannot earn even close to that amount with several months of work.
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, it is us, the people, who unconsciously inflate the paycheques of various professions, thereby proving that importance of work' is relative and not the sole factor influencing remuneration and
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of jobs. To build an exhaustive list of the driving forces of
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for professions is an impossible feat since these forces are constantly changing.
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, there can be strategic measures taken to ensure that people are paid, at least, what they deserve. The risk involved in a profession should be adequately compensated through higher incentives by governments.
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, firemen should not be liable to the same taxes that are borne by professionals in a low-risk job.
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, skilled professionals
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as doctors, scientists, sportsmen, technicians should have a higher base pay than that of non-skilled professionals
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as receptionists, waiters and delivery-boys. There are several other strategic fiscal measures that our governments can take up to ensure equitable salary for various professions. When we compare the net worth of CEOs and movie stars with nurses, soldiers and teachers, a significant gap, which is morally unjustifiable, becomes evident.
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, we must not ignore the economic forces behind
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and strive towards building reasonable and achievable remuneration policies to serve the underpaid.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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