Many high level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent females. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.

There is a migration of countryside and small-town residents to metropolitan areas with the purpose of employment and high living standards. As a consequence, these cities recently are facing with the problem caused by overcrowded areas. Regarding

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leads to several negative impacts on other fields of a community

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nvironment, health care system, transports, employment as well as accommodation. The aim of

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ollowing essay will provide problems and recommend some actions to solve

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problem With the increase of population in major cities, transport systems were put an excessive burden on residents. It is easy to recognize that mode of transports is overcrowded and the residents face a variety of inconveniences and difficulty during daily access. Indeed, workers and students are inevitable traffic congestion during peak hours. Recommendations are that governments should invest

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modes of transports consist of huge numerous passengers carrying capacity and fuel sufficient.

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, applying different time for students and workers are

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suggested in order to avoid overcrowding at the same time. In terms of actions for the community. It is advisable that

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of driving private vehicles, individuals should take advantage of public transports. Apart from

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ransport system, overpopulation in cosmopolitan cities had an influence on the jobless rate. The more demand for work positions, the higher

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nemployment rate will be.

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, these individuals might participate in criminal activities to earn money. It is recommended that the government should offer extra jobs including white-collar and blue-collar.

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, the state spends a part of its budget for increasing aid to the unemployed

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and providing additional refundable tax credits to lower-income households. In conclusion, there are two main problems being mentioned, namely the unemployment rate and transport systems of transports.

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, The best way to combat those problems is to improve the quality of life in rural areas.