The consumption of the world’s resources (oil and water, etc) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and pollutions? (approximately 250 words)

The overuse of natural
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is one of the great problems facing humanity these days.
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phenomenon that involves several problems is derived from different causes normally generated from daily human activities
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I believe that various feasible measures are taken to prevent and overcome them. On the one hand, there are two main reasons for the growing
utilization
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utilisation
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of natural
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.
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, resource consumption at an accelerated rate stems from overpopulation. Population growth could lead to
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depletion
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people's daily needs and the expansion of agriculture to meet people's
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needs.
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As in the case of India, which is the second-most populous
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in the world,
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to face the worst long-term
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crisis in history, as demand outstripped supply and threatened agricultural production and economic growth since
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year.
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, the development of transportation and technology
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the generation of different modern vehicles and machinery.
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inventions are
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by energy generated from fossil fuels
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as coal and oil
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ultimately cause scarcity of these natural
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. Taking Australia as an illustration, coal burning is the main source of electricity in
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country
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and eventually, Australian coal is predicted to run out in around 40 years.
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, I believe that many actions have been implemented to help mitigate these issues. For the problem of
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scarcity, many countries have published
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-saving policies and educational
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conservation programs to increase public awareness on
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issue.
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, the Singapore government is striving to reduce domestic
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consumption to 140 litres per capita by implementing various initiatives
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one of them is the
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conservation awareness program.
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, for the reduction of fossil fuels, humanity is using alternative energy sources,
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as wind, solar and nuclear power
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that they
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might be a possible solution to the depletion of nonrenewable sources because they are clean energy sources and available in unlimited supply. As an example,
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Arab Emirates launched the Arab world's first nuclear power plant, which is an attempt to meet the demands of the energy-hungry Gulf
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even though
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country
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is
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the world's seventh-largest proven crude oil reserves. In conclusion, the overexploitation of natural
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is attributed to the strong demand derived from the increase in population and the development of technical utilities,
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the excessive dependence on these
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, governments
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. Governments
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and individuals in each
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are working in various methods to properly use and conserve them.

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task response
Task response: The essay talks on causes and fixes but it does not clearly discuss pollution from using Earth’s resources. Add a line on pollution and link each cause to a fix.
coherence
Coherence and cohesion: Start each paragraph with a clear idea sentence and link ideas with small words like and, but, also, so. Break long ideas into two smaller parts.
content
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language
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structure
Clear aim to show cause and fix.
content
Two examples are used to back up points.
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Intro and conclusion exist.

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