Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of lower positions in the same company. To what extent do you agree.

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Payscale has always been an area of discussion in the cooperate segment. There is a section of people who think that senior executive compensation should be in accordance with the salaries of lower positions.
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some believe that senior
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should be paid high salaries
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the nature of the demand for their job. I completely agree, as when we move up the leadership role a lot more is at stake so the income should be in line with that. On one hand, Both senior position
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and other
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have quite separate roles, which enables them to do their tasks well. As for people in the lower
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, They get the core job done for your business with hard work and time for one department .
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the senior position requires more stakeholder management and working for the
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benefit of the
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, the CEO of the
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has met so many subordinates, vendors and other
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decision
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with a futuristic approach
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a lot at stake and the risk involved is much higher.
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, The amount of pressure in terms of managing employees in the best possible way so that they are happy
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considering the profit aspect of the group.
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, there is no work-life balance as meetings are usually spread across the day making it difficult to take out time for oneself and for family.
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, One of my relatives is the CEO of a
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he always has prior
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work so he is mostly unable to come
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any family functions.
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, It is imperative that senior authority employees have very high salaries compared to other workers of lower positions in the same
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as their job demands more time,
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and there is
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enormous pressure.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Senior management
  • Salary disparity
  • Incentives
  • Income inequality
  • Organizational culture
  • Career progression
  • Employee morale
  • Compensation
  • Financial success
  • Decision-making
  • Responsibility
  • Merit
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