You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

This

is to inform you that I am a travel credit

card

holder of your bank. My

card

has been lost yesterday when I was at Metro station at

canought

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can ought

Place. The

card

was golden in

color

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and 4587458965 number embossed on it.

Incident

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The Incident

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took place when I was sitting on

station

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the station

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bench and I kept my bag

to me. After few minutes I was realized that my wallet was not in the bag. After

that

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I was searching my wallet where I was sitting but it could not

found

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be found

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Then

was registered

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an official report to the station master about my wallet has been lost and simultaneously called at

call

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center

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bank

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the bank

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to block my credit

card

as soon as possible and I

also

informed that

last

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my last

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purchase was on 08th December 2020 of 3547 INR. Request you to please give me the confirmation that my

card

has been blocked and

also

I request you to please issue me a new credit

card

with the same benefits and features along with

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the

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requisite fees. Your early response will be highly appreciated. Yours Sincerely Mandeep Singh

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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however
although
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despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have lost your credit card Write a letter to the manager of your bank In the letter explain how you lost the card ask the manger to cancel the old card and to issue you a replacement

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