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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own

#employers #people #jobs #information #hobbies #interests
With the increase in security risk, private
data
 is more prone to attackers due to which some people feel sharing their
information
 with employers might be risky.Whereas few persons consider it as a normal thing. In my view
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we all should be very careful while giving our details to officials which will
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Firstly
, giving your personal
data
 like family and health details to your employer is sometimes mandatory and most of the humans are comfortable with
this
.
Moreover
,
this
information
 proves to be very useful in case of any emergency.
For instance
, if a person has met with an accident
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mployer can contact his relatives through the given
information
. But sometimes cyber attacks can steal our personal
information
 and misuse it.
Data
 mishandling is very common now and it leads to very serious circumstances. Hackers these days, hack the systems and gather all the sensitive
data
 about a person and use it unethically. We all are aware of the
data
 sharing done by
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 to Google
analytica
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analytics
, due to which stricter policies were placed in
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U. It could lead to many serious crimes and a person can
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 all his saving if attackers get access to his bank accounts. To conclude, in my opinion sharing each and every detail to our employers is not a very intelligent decision. We should be aware of the consequences of giving our details to HR systems. Not to forget that we have a right to withhold our
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sensitive
data
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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