Most high level jobs are done by man.Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women ?

Nowadays, males have more prestigious jobs than females. It is always said that
women
should be a stay-at-home mom whereas men should bring home the bacon, but now the opinion is changed. Well, there are many reasons which will be discussed in
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overnment should give or not give that working places to
women
. On the one hand, the high-level jobs occupied by the male decreases the balances of opportunities and
also
power between male and female in some companies. Due to the fact that we live in the most developed and supportive century
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women
don’t have to suffer from discrimination. So to establish the equal power of both genders
women
actually should work in
such
high-level positions.
On the other hand
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overnment should not take any actions for reserving positions for females. They can create
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comfortable surrounding for them by making sure that
women
have the access to the education which makes them powerful and fully-prepared for their future.
In addition
,
women
don’t have to suffer from sexual harassment, any discrimination and so on.
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overnment should provide strict law where humans of both genders coexist with ease. In conclusion, by analyzing that information both
women
and men should be viewed as equally capable and the top positions should never be reserved based on gender.
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should ensure that they put enough effort to protect
women
from complex problems and they should not encourage a certain percentage of any employment places to be reserved for them .
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