As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.

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claims a major part of people’s adult life and for mental health and
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it is very important for them to be
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with their jobs. There are many things that can make people happy with their professional lives.
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is no longer a fool’s hope. There are personal and
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factors that can help achieve a
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professional life. On a personal
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if someone is passionate about their
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, they will naturally feel more driven and happier about doing it and will not consider it a burden.
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do a few things to ensure their workers are happy.
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, appreciating someone’s hard
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makes them feel good and urges them to do even better.
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, providing a
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healthy working
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to the
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makes them feel relaxed and
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about their jobs. In the past, the concept of job satisfaction was not considered important by either the
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or the
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were only concerned about getting the job done and
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, no matter how stressed out they were, were forced to deliver at their jobs.
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, these days there is increasing awareness about how a stressful
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environment
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affects individual wellbeing. Most companies now have regular mental health awareness seminars and offer their workers support regarding any problems they might be facing at
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. Even the
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have realised that their
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can deliver their best only in a relaxed
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.
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, the expectation of job satisfaction not only is realistic
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very much within the reach of most professionals. To conclude, I believe doing something one is passionate about in a supportive
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can help achieve
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and happy professional life.
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