As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Most
of
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people
spend their Add an article
the people
life time
at work; thereby, Correct your spelling
lifetime
job
satisfaction
is concerned as a major element of individual well-being. It is indisputable that working overloaded can cause mental problems to workers
. I think that job
satisfaction
will increase life
quality of Add an article
the life
people
in
nowadays.
There are several factors of Change preposition
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job
satisfaction
in workplace
that promote Add an article
the workplace
a workplace
an
individual well-being Remove the article
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such
as good relationships with colleagues, good work-life balance, attractive
fair salary and Add an article
an attractive
great
working environment. These factors can contribute Correct article usage
a great
job
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to job
satisfaction
and it
will enhance Correct pronoun usage
apply
mental
health of Add an article
the mental
people
. For example
, there are many workers
who committed suicide from working overloaded in Japan. Therefore
, the government promotes the job
satisfaction
policy for the companies to follow the rules to reduce this
tragic phenomenon.
In addition
, the expectation of job
satisfaction
for all workers
is now increasing because people
concern
about their happiness and well-being, especially in the new generation like Gen Y and Gen Z. Change the form of the verb
concerned
Hence
, the possibility of job
satisfaction
can be realistic if the company raises the awareness of morals and ethics in their workplace and the government should concern on this
problem as well.
In conclusion, there are many factors of job
satisfaction
that can contribute well-being of people
and I believed that it can be done by the company, the government and all workers
together.Submitted by noppapat_k on
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