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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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Most
of
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people
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the people
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 spend their
life time
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 at work; thereby,
job
satisfaction
 is concerned as a major element of individual well-being. It is indisputable that working overloaded can cause mental problems to
workers
. I think that
job
satisfaction
 will increase
life
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 quality of
people
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nowadays. There are several factors of
job
satisfaction
 in
workplace
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the workplace
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 that promote
an
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individual well-being
such
 as good relationships with colleagues, good work-life balance,
attractive
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 fair salary and
great
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 working environment. These factors can contribute
job
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satisfaction
 and
it
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will enhance
mental
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the mental
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 health of
people
.
For example
, there are many
workers
 who committed suicide from working overloaded in Japan.
Therefore
, the government promotes the
job
satisfaction
 policy for the companies to follow the rules to reduce
this
 tragic phenomenon.
In addition
, the expectation of
job
satisfaction
 for all
workers
 is now increasing because
people
concern
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 about their happiness and well-being, especially in the new generation like Gen Y and Gen Z.
Hence
, the possibility of
job
satisfaction
 can be realistic if the company raises the awareness of morals and ethics in their workplace and the government should concern on
this
 problem as well. In conclusion, there are many factors of
job
satisfaction
 that can contribute well-being of
people
 and I believed that it can be done by the company, the government and all
workers
 together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job satisfaction
  • wellbeing
  • contribute
  • meaningful work
  • work-life balance
  • career progression
  • workplace environment
  • recognition
  • constructive feedback
  • compensation
  • benefits
  • job security
  • autonomy
  • skills match
  • interests match
  • variety
  • challenge
  • economic conditions
  • labor market
  • individual expectations
  • job role
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