As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all worker?

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The issue of
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satisfaction has been a lot of debates. Some might say that
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happiness at
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an important factor in each individual life to ensure the well-being of occupation.
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insist on the opinion that the element which decides on their satisfaction is
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salary. Even each of the factor
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its reality in human being life, I personally agree with the former opinion by following reasons.
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with, working
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friendly environment with followed our passion major are significant to be happy at
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job
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the job
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, working with our passion will bring higher productivity and efficiency.
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, when we follow to
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as our passion, we will have
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the impetus
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to wake up every morning and to come office with a greeting which will never happen for a boring and hatred
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.
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in
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also
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plays an important role to measure the worker's
satisfication
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satisfaction
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, we have
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opportunity
oppotunity
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the oppotunity
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to meet friendly colleagues and share experiences
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other, especially working with
sociable
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manager will help us avoid being pressured.
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, having a
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in
suitable
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environment with
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major will help
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create more content and devotion to the development of our company.
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, some might thinks that aiming for
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very high salary will prove our achievements in career path and be the only reasons for us to target for. In fact, when people are paid a very highs
mount
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of salary, it comes along with social position and ranks in
company
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the company
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.
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, everything has its price which is sacrificing your private life. Being rich means you cannot share your time with your family and spend overtime at
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.
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, in some cases, when your family needs you while you are still at
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, it will be a very dramatic dilemma In conclusion, happiness at working influences directly
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an employee's lifecycle and
motiviation
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motivation
to remain loyal to and employed with an organization.
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