As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all worker?
The issue of
job
satisfaction has been a lot of debates. Some might say that,
happiness at Remove the comma
apply
work
is play
an important factor in each individual life to ensure the well-being of occupation. Change the verb form
plays
On the contrary
, other
insist on the opinion that the element which decides on their satisfaction is Correct pronoun usage
others
high
salary. Even each of the factor Add an article
a high
demonstrate
its reality in human being life, I personally agree with the former opinion by following reasons.
Change the verb form
demonstrates
To begin
with, working Change preposition
in at
at
friendly environment with followed our passion major are significant to be happy at Correct your spelling
a
job
. Add an article
the job
Firstly
, working with our passion will bring higher productivity and efficiency. For example
, when we follow to work
as our passion, we will have impetus
to wake up every morning and to come office with a greeting which will never happen for a boring and hatred Add an article
the impetus
an impetus
job
. Secondly
, environment
in Add an article
the environment
an environment
office
Correct article usage
the office
also
plays an important role to measure the worker's satisfication
. Correct your spelling
satisfaction
For instance
, we have Correct your spelling
opportunity
oppotunity
to meet friendly colleagues and share experiences Correct article usage
the oppotunity
each
other, especially working with Change preposition
with each
sociable
manager will help us avoid being pressured. Add an article
the sociable
a sociable
Finally
, having a job
in suitable
environment with Add an article
a suitable
preferred
major will help Correct article usage
a preferred
our
create more content and devotion to the development of our company.
Correct pronoun usage
us
On the other hand
, some might thinks that aiming for the
very high salary will prove our achievements in career path and be the only reasons for us to target for. In fact, when people are paid a very highs Correct article usage
a
mount
of salary, it comes along with social position and ranks in Correct your spelling
amount
company
. Add an article
the company
However
, everything has its price which is sacrificing your private life. Being rich means you cannot share your time with your family and spend overtime at work
. Therefore
, in some cases, when your family needs you while you are still at work
, it will be a very dramatic dilemma
In conclusion, happiness at working influences directly to
an employee's lifecycle and Change preposition
apply
motiviation
to remain loyal to and employed with an organization.Correct your spelling
motivation
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