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Many high level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent females. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#level #positions #companies #men #workforce #countries #percent #females #percentage #women
Most of the top
positions
 in several companies are occupied by males even though more than
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50
percent
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 of
workforce
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the workforce
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 is females in many developed countries. I strongly disagree
to
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 the notion that the
firm's
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firms
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 should provide a fixed proportion of
top level
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top-level
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 job
positions
 to
women
. It is a false notion to allocate a certain portion of
high level
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high-level
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 designation to
women
,
however
, the allocation should only
based
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 on the educational qualification and the ability to manage while in a higher
position
, rather than selecting them on a gender basis or by giving a reservation to
women
. Only the apt person who is well talented should be considered to the same.
Moreover
, the experience of that person should be considered as he gained better knowledge which is enough to managerial
positions
, whereas, if a
under
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experienced
women
 with lack of talent is in the top
position
, it can be the only reason to
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shut down
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shutdown
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 the company.
In addition
, if a fixed percentage of top
position
 is reserved for
women
, the eagerness for higher education for
women
 will get reduced as they already have a reservation, so
ratio
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 of qualified
women
get
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 reduced.
Moreover
, the growth rate of
firm
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a firm
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get
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 declined if
a
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professionaly
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professionally
professional
 incompetent
women
 occupy
in
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such
position
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a position
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. Even though not considering the gender as well as the reservations,
women
 can be in higher
positions
 if
she
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 capable of.
For instance
, nowadays, several
women
 work in managerial
positions
 in many companies like
as
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in my company that I work. In conclusion, the reservations for
women
 for
high level
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positions
 should not be promoted and should
discouraged
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 as it brings a depreciation in the economy of the country.
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