You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - ask for some time off to complete a qualification. - Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. - Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope you are well and in

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best health. I am writing

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letter to request you a fortnight off work on 16 May in order to complete my Master’s degree in Business Administration, to be more precise, I must submit my graduation thesis by 30 May. Unfortunately, all my usual leave had been used up.

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with my colleagues to cover it.

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, I would check e email daily and be available for emergency phone calls.

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, once I resume, I would

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to come into the office earlier than usual work and work on Sat to catch up on

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thing I had missed.

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could be an inconvenience to you and the rest of the team.

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our firm will benefit from my research.

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, my expertise will assist us

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for

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and boost sales. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to

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my leave application approved. Yours sincerely, Thu Loan Nguyen.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

10 paragraphs

192 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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